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    dots Submission Name: Next to me dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 44/25/55
    Words: 323
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 79
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    In my life there has always been you
    We've fought , we've grown cold

    Though the Distance has separated us
    Many a times , We always find ourselves drifting back to each other

    Its going on 12 years now, the fears held inside seem to linger , ive made stupid choices and so have you

    Those Fears seem to hold us hostage
    But the love is shinning through
    I can't explain my love for you

    Or the butterflies making me feel so nauseous
    Up until this time I've always been cautious

    So one day i decided to finally come clean ,
    I told you exactly what you ment to me

    From your Cheshire smile and the warmth of your skin to that gleem in your eyes that always does me in

    Ive been captivated by you ,your astounding presence , your voice that forever remains in my thoughts

    It's been countless restless nights holding onto these feelings
    So i don't even know why im so dam shy

    As i wept tears for your sake , even though you we're trying to keep me safe

    I felt something come over me as i stood crying in the snow , Something inside of me yelled , No you can't go !

    I think thats the time when the fear started dissipate and i felt the motivation starting to take over me

    I was not going to give up , no , not this time , until time has ended , i knew you would be mine , to have , to hold , to Embarrass til we grow old

    im comfortable letting the world fall down around me , as long as your standing there Next to me




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