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    dots Submission Name: conundrum dots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.24 - 666/488/434
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
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    dotsconundrum dots
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    over and over again, the same story in my head
    it gets boring at this depth there is rarely much else left
    just a shotty core design
    buggy program of the mind
    alternate realities
    living waking dreams

    they don't yell or put me down
    i'm the only one i know
    who doesn't smother them or drown
    i put them neatly in a row
    they serve my focus
    form a function
    when i need them
    for the day
    back and forth
    i always wonder
    if i need them
    in my way

    ideas that grow into notions
    notions that grow into beliefs
    but beliefs won't turn into fact
    unless they already were them




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