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    dots Submission Name: ideas of referencedots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.24 - 666/489/434
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsideas of referencedots
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    i'll remember the words if i'm in the right movie
    i'll listen to anything you have to say
    i don't know the difference but madly and truly
    i don't want you to ever go away

    send me out the latest salvation
    dope me up on medication
    shut me down i need a vacation
    i don't know the destination

    if you're you that makes me me
    and i'm fine with the logic of your melodies
    if you can think you would have thought it out
    so i see no need to remain worried

    i want a little fun
    and a bit of something new
    so let me indulge the fantasy
    i know what to say but what to do




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