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    dots Submission Name: The Hand Of Goddots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 313/246/342
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Prose/
    Total Views: 113
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    Bytes: 714



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    dotsThe Hand Of Goddots
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    In which pain becomes a bitter hand
    Caressing the surface of our crumbling Earth
    Her madness strikes when you touch the sky
    And forget to leave her fanciful coos

    In a full embrace she tempers our destruction
    Cutting through incessant wars
    Biting through the flesh of bliss
    To reveal its sadly ignorant truths

    After the glory that she has won
    A darkened passage once reknowned
    For its many fervent lights
    And plain country tales

    Opens to the makers of grandeous possibilities
    Taking with them the initial opening
    Encasing them in blinding hate
    Proving still their human insatiabilities.




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