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    dots Submission Name: Elagabalus pt. IIIdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 313/246/343
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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    dotsElagabalus pt. IIIdots
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    In time your body aligns
    In the same way that does mine
    Your skin with my skin based off the same color
    Makes me think we might be kin
    But their different textures and lawful tones
    Graze at the surface
    Making certain I notice the difference
    Between our movements

    A quiet kiss with only sounds
    Loud enough to fill the void
    That occupies our hearts
    Reverberating in our chests
    To get swallowed by our lungs

    My mouth salavates like you're a fine meal
    Food for the soul, as they call it
    Gratifying in ways I never knew
    When there's nothing more to say
    Because your countenance perfects whatever words
    Put on display
    Just as your legs
    Open like curtains
    In artistic blatancy
    Of a god's delicate archetype.




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