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    dots Submission Name: Rain In Egyptdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 313/246/343
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Bytes: 666



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    dotsRain In Egyptdots
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    Burrowing into the sheets
    The frame of your round hips
    Sloping only so slightly
    From an angle that isn't entirely in motion

    A lack of humidity brings the ability for my hands to slide over your skin
    From your lower back to your thighs
    I am holding onto you for dear life

    My pelvic bone gathers with your own
    Creating a connection, no searing release
    But compact energy
    You are open
    But I am torn
    Between getting lost in your eyes and objectifying the reality
    That you are mine.

    If we are sweating
    I've mistaken it for the rain.




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