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Submission Name:
Inside
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Author:
Chelebel
Elite Ratio:
2.18 - 53/169/180
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107
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Inside
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Inside it feels
So confined
Inside the search
To look outside
Inside we know
The problem resides
Inside it’s just
A matter of time
Inside I want
To go outside
Inside I feel
Inside this mind
Inside I want
To be outside
Inside I see
Inside my mind
Inside I know
I am confined
Inside I want
To be defined
Inside I know
To be revived
Outside I feel
So alive
Submitted on 2020-04-01 06:41:54
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