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Submission Name: Inside dots

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Author:	Chelebel
Elite Ratio:	2.18 - 53/169/180
Words:	107

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Inside

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Inside it feels
So confined

Inside the search
To look outside

Inside we know
The problem resides

Inside it’s just
A matter of time

Inside I want
To go outside

Inside I feel
Inside this mind

Inside I want
To be outside

Inside I see
Inside my mind

Inside I know
I am confined

Inside I want
To be defined

Inside I know
To be revived

Outside I feel
So alive

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