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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 53/169/180
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsInside dots
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    Inside it feels
    So confined


    Inside the search
    To look outside


    Inside we know
    The problem resides


    Inside it’s just
    A matter of time


    Inside I want
    To go outside



    Inside I feel
    Inside this mind




    Inside I want
    To be outside


    Inside I see
    Inside my mind



    Inside I know
    I am confined


    Inside I want
    To be defined



    Inside I know
    To be revived


    Outside I feel
    So alive




    Submitted on 2020-04-01 06:41:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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