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This is a memory of breath

Author: Daniel Barlow
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This is a memory of breath


i came to know the state of your fragility,
understood fully - just how beautiful you are,
if i said you were as the candle, and i thought i had been giving you
my softest breath - - - but you told me i had been          
blowing you out.                                        

Submitted on 2020-04-12 06:46:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i cant see what video you must have carefully chosen for us. ... not that your words need a video ..

i wouldn't declare myself to be particularly fragile and i have never aspired to being beautiful, but i can most definitely relate to the feeling of ' being blown out'. of having my free spirit crushed. there seems to be a fine line between passionate love and smothering love.

too much love can most definitely snuff out candles. and there lies the tragedy.


| Posted on 2021-03-12 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]

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