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The pulse at her throat

Author: Daniel Barlow
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The pulse at her throat


     what you don't understand is the extent to which i love you.
     while you fret at what each coming day will bring
     i can tell you i am the certainty of the sun.


     beautiful as butterflies over flowers.
     pretty little fires i could put out.

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