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    dots Submission Name: Little livesdots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 31/82/75
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsLittle livesdots
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    Tried to tell a lie,
    But I joked.

    Tried to run and hide,
    But I hoped,

    I wouldn't

    Have to see you sigh,
    But I choked.

    And every day
    I wonder,
    If I'd of stayed,
    Instead of wandered.

    Would you be here,
    Laughing about
    Our shitty past.

    Would you be here,
    Runnin' bout,
    Runnin' past
    Me.

    Little lives
    Livin' fast.

    Little lies,
    Eatin' past
    Me.

    Every day,
    A little stronger.
    Tell myself,
    A little longer.

    I'll put my past behind me,
    Say devil, no.
    I might be.

    But never say maybe
    When you know you're gonna say
    Yes.

    Don't you tell me
    You'll think about it.
    Don't say you guess.

    I won't hear
    Any more your
    Lies.

    Told enough myself
    This I can't
    Deny.

    Little lives
    Livin' fast.

    Little lies,
    Eatin' past
    Me.




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