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Sailor, alone.

Author: eggshells
ASL Info:    23/M/WA
Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 31 /82 /75
Words: 87
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Sailor, alone.

Am now all

But I
Can steer this ship on
My own.

It was you
Who decided to close
The door.

So I
Built this ship
For leaving your shore.

And I
Can scrub down the hull
And raise these sails myself.

Yes, I
Built this ship
No one else.

Back then, you
Never wanted me
To roam.

Yet now, I
Built this ship
Because you sunk our home.

Submitted on 2020-04-15 23:48:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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