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    dots Submission Name: Sailor, alone.dots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 30/80/74
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 146
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    Bytes: 580



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    dotsSailor, alone.dots
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    I
    Am now all
    Alone.

    But I
    Can steer this ship on
    My own.

    It was you
    Who decided to close
    The door.

    So I
    Built this ship
    For leaving your shore.

    And I
    Can scrub down the hull
    And raise these sails myself.

    Yes, I
    Built this ship
    No one else.

    Back then, you
    Never wanted me
    To roam.

    Yet now, I
    Built this ship
    Because you sunk our home.






    Submitted on 2020-04-15 23:48:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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