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    dots Submission Name: Self Mutilationdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 313/246/342
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Prose/
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    dotsSelf Mutilationdots
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    It starts with discomfort
    Laced with any amount of confidence
    Until something strikes you with an external force
    And then you are shaking;
    Making of the attack one that is personal
    And you're left with a calloused wound, burning
    When you know to bind your skin
    Through deliberately scorching your flesh.
    The pain is stillborn
    And you are left with the loss of healing
    But the tears you shed wash away its scars
    And you're blessed instead with the acknowledgment
    Of your own disgust
    That you just couldn't stand bleeding enough.




    Submitted on 2020-05-11 00:52:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The pain is stillborn

    Wow, yes.

    Something you intend to pull forth from yourself, to bring life when you feel dead. But this pain brings no life only more death. Laboring for the life craved, left
    Instead in bleeding in vain.

    Good stuff
    | Posted on 2020-05-17 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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