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    dots Submission Name: These Transgressionsdots
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    Author: OneDarkFlame92
    ASL Info:    23/m/Numeanor
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 461/424/227
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 41
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    dotsThese Transgressionsdots
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    If I start now
    and I get this written down.
    before the Christendom of my thoughts -
    I can individuate my fears from the chapel,
    and color these pews blue

    For when you look at it
    from my point of view.
    There is nothing left to discuss.
    And I cannot wait for you to catch up,
    to close out these pages.
    We are damned if we stay here -

    Damned if we don't

    It does not simply start becoming less clear
    It simply begins when I take my pen out.
    So peace


    be with you




    Submitted on 2020-05-16 23:51:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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