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    dots Submission Name: Love is Lovedots
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    Author: poetotoe
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    dotsLove is Lovedots
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    At the beginning of life
    more so at the end of life
    love is love to one and all.

    The only gift favored in life
    for the end of life comes fast
    love is undeniably forgivable.

    In the beginning, our life's end
    love is what one, two take away
    for love never ends, love never dies.


    605 © Thomas Collins McGowan
    Site “poet.us” May 17, 2020




    Submitted on 2020-05-17 22:33:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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