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Submission Name:
43
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Author:
homeless
ASL Info:
30
Elite Ratio:
6.98 - 29/19/37
Words:
114
Class/Type:
Poetry/Passion
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Description:
43
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With 4 and 3 a sum is set
7 from the year we met
4th month, 3rd year
That is when I felt you near
A word of 4 letters
A phrase of 3 words forever
Be it Browning or Shakespeare's "Sonnet 43"
It is felt: intense and free
In my dreams; it's you I see
In my eyes you are the light
Which illuminates the darkest night
4 Greek words for one emotion
3 express my fierce devotion
43 perfect numbers: 5 and 19 are but two
The date creation of one very perfect you
Submitted on 2020-05-18 18:41:32
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