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    dots Submission Name: 43dots
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    Author: homeless
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    6.98 - 29/19/37
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    With 4 and 3 a sum is set
    7 from the year we met

    4th month, 3rd year
    That is when I felt you near

    A word of 4 letters
    A phrase of 3 words forever

    Be it Browning or Shakespeare's "Sonnet 43"
    It is felt: intense and free
    In my dreams; it's you I see

    In my eyes you are the light
    Which illuminates the darkest night

    4 Greek words for one emotion
    3 express my fierce devotion

    43 perfect numbers: 5 and 19 are but two
    The date creation of one very perfect you





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