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Submission Name: 43 dots

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Author:	homeless
ASL Info:	30
Elite Ratio:	6.98 - 29/19/37
Words:	114

Class/Type:	Poetry/Passion
Total Views:	55
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	646

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With 4 and 3 a sum is set
7 from the year we met

4th month, 3rd year
That is when I felt you near

A word of 4 letters
A phrase of 3 words forever

Be it Browning or Shakespeare's "Sonnet 43"
It is felt: intense and free
In my dreams; it's you I see

In my eyes you are the light
Which illuminates the darkest night

4 Greek words for one emotion
3 express my fierce devotion

43 perfect numbers: 5 and 19 are but two
The date creation of one very perfect you

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.