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    dots Submission Name: Good Morningdots
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    Author: Narna
    Elite Ratio:    1.73 - 14/102/70
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGood Morningdots
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    A mo(U)rning;
    etched in time that,
    as a team, teems with regret.
    I held you in the front pocket of my mind,
    easy to find, easy to hold, hard to know.
    "Doesn't anyone care, I could have been in an accident!".
    But you weren't.
    An accident of mind,
    maybe.
    I hadn't thought to call you.
    Not that I didn't think,
    because that happens all the time;
    subconscious.
    "Unconcious".
    But you weren't
    sure that I was,
    sure that you knew.
    But you didn't.
    You. Did. Not.
    Tell me,
    How much do I owe you now,
    how much should I pay;
    a thousand dull errs on the side of caution.






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