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    dots Submission Name: Rain dots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.05 - 368/366/172
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 109
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    dotsRain dots
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    Even the rain knows its purpose
    Bursting from the circus sky
    Tiny acrobats
    Their line
    Sleek as arrows
    Slanting through space
    An assault against my skin

    Fearless- untamed- fierce

    Collecting as oceans on my body
    Infinitesimally infinite
    Muses in miniature

    Pattering poetry
    Upon Century forgotten
    Tin-roof shacks

    Stirring the cauldron of
    Alabama red-clay
    As the Choctaw warrior woman
    Prophesies

    Be like the rain
    Fearless- untamed- fierce

    ©️DiCicco Cosentino




    Submitted on 2020-05-29 01:32:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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