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    dots Submission Name: Love is Enoughdots
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    Author: poetotoe
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    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove is Enoughdots
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    Once you know love
    love is enough for you
    for you to survive in life.

    Love is forever. Life is not
    on a monument, it is itched
    as life is tomorrow's estimate.

    Your love is yours to give away
    and yours to take away with you
    that day, that time comes too fast.

    In another's breath, in another kiss.
    You want to last forever within you.
    Time is forever, as your love is forever.




    Submitted on 2020-06-06 07:00:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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