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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 313/246/343
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 19
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    Bytes: 816



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    "watch me burst into a flame, incinerate the main stage and make a bitch of the game. it's insane - all the ways perfection's portrayed but not relayed. gravitated a little bit and now my-self is not pertained
    to the industry, or to the dot
    the period, when a rapper tries finishing his sentences, but the media needs to complain
    not to debate, but complicate the matters of which we're going through. are you willing to? placate, mind-erase - make the whole thing stop and regenerate. make of this world what God intended instead of madness and hate." He free-styles to a group after having picked up an english dictionary for the first time. All the pats on the back he gets from his friends generates a wide grin onto his face. These are the moments worth living for.




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