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Submission Name:
The State of Things
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Author:
Forgiven
ASL Info:
38/F/Florida
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3.8 - 337/334/97
Words:
94
Class/Type:
Poetry/Passion
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My feelings with the world right now.
The State of Things
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Release the kraken
Pull open the veil
Grab the lion by the tail
Attain that magic,
hold the light.
Watch the day turn into night.
Wandering madness,
obtuse mood.
A slight of anything
and it gets rude.
Lets not forget
who we are.
You can’t take it back
When it goes too far.
Feelings are static,
electricity is in the air.
We are at the injunction,
and I know you care.
Find your core
Speak your truth
Don’t give almonds
to people without a tooth.
Submitted on 2020-06-25 13:33:15
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