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    dots Submission Name: The State of Thingsdots
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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 337/332/96
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 17
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 648



    Description:
       My feelings with the world right now.


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    dotsThe State of Thingsdots
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    Release the kraken
    Pull open the veil
    Grab the lion by the tail

    Attain that magic,
    hold the light.
    Watch the day turn into night.

    Wandering madness,
    obtuse mood.
    A slight of anything
    and it gets rude.

    Lets not forget
    who we are.
    You can’t take it back
    When it goes too far.

    Feelings are static,
    electricity is in the air.
    We are at the injunction,
    and I know you care.

    Find your core
    Speak your truth
    Don’t give almonds
    to people without a tooth.




    Submitted on 2020-06-25 13:33:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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