The State of Things

Author: Forgiven ASL Info:    38/F/Florida Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339 /335 /100 Words: 94

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The State of Things

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Release the kraken Pull open the veil Grab the lion by the tail Attain that magic, hold the light. Watch the day turn into night. Wandering madness, obtuse mood. A slight of anything and it gets rude. Lets not forget who we are. You can’t take it back When it goes too far. Feelings are static, electricity is in the air. We are at the injunction, and I know you care. Find your core Speak your truth Don’t give almonds to people without a tooth.

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