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The State of Things

Author: Forgiven
ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339 /335 /100
Words: 94
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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My feelings with the world right now.

The State of Things

Release the kraken
Pull open the veil
Grab the lion by the tail

Attain that magic,
hold the light.
Watch the day turn into night.

Wandering madness,
obtuse mood.
A slight of anything
and it gets rude.

Lets not forget
who we are.
You can’t take it back
When it goes too far.

Feelings are static,
electricity is in the air.
We are at the injunction,
and I know you care.

Find your core
Speak your truth
Don’t give almonds
to people without a tooth.

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