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    dots Submission Name: The Lake part 1dots
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    Author: jjd
    ASL Info:    26 / M / Marshfield, Mo.
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 20/83/39
    Words: 341
    Class/Type: Story/Romance
    Total Views: 95
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    dotsThe Lake part 1dots
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    Tonight, my wife plans going out for a jog like she normally does. I typically join her, but I told her I was planning on going to the store and I would join her later. She has a wonderful surprise waiting for her when she gets to the park!
    The evening is late, and the sun is almost gone. We always go to the park down the road. 2 miles all the way around the lake. The other night she told me she wanted to be adventuress, So I planned something special!
    I got to park 20 minutes before she did and set up on the back side of the lake. There is a bridge that goes over this little creek and so I set up back there.
    I got my rope ready, a fake gun, a blanket on lay on. And all the sex toys I could carry.
    It was time, I could see her get out of the car and start stretching those wonder tight ass, and her smooth long legs. She texted after she was finished to let me know that she was there. I replied, “I will be there soon, I love you!”
    She started running around the lake, and I had to time this perfectly! I put on this mask, gloves, and used a different cologne that she would not recognize. And waited on the other side of the bridge.
    She finally got up to me and started over the bridge, and I jump out, pointed the gun at her and told her to stop. I made her go down the creek to where I set everything up.
    She asked me, “What are you doing, why are you doing this?” I just stayed silent; I did not want her to know it was me. I point the gun at her and signaled for her to go to the tree. Where I tied her up and cut off all her cloths. Naked, afraid and does not understand what is going on.




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