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    dots Submission Name: "Drunk George Bush Hologram", 2017dots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 331/137/201
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots"Drunk George Bush Hologram", 2017dots
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    He's mostly in blue, with bits of Ae gold.
    Throw a piece of paper at it's face
    to see if it slurs an abominable scold
    But it can't hug a bunny nor go home.

    It points the finger, you are to blame
    Even artificial intellect knows his game
    Still unqualified and nothing changed
    Technology officially manyack insane.

    Intoxication unveils a unibrow
    The cocktail half empty in his hand
    Mad high on cowboy cookies 
    before airing out money worshippers.
    With a leaning as if still trying to kiss Oprah.

    Such a shit thing isn't cool or creepy,
    supposedly a hilarious augmentation 
    of reality but almost scientifically cheesy
    and a poor person of selective choice 
    to eradicate boredom by celebrity interest.
    I mean, these things may fake decency
    and this fucker isn't even dead yet.

    Though, it will wave, 
    smile and salute without missing 
    a point of portrayal flaw.

    Aw fuck, look it's dancing.
    Retard memorial service style.









            




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      He is not at all loved in this part of the world.
    I don't really know enough about the politics of the USA. I know I cannot trust the media and I have never known any politician to give a straight answer. Some seem totally ignorant. Some just utterly stupid. Each time I hear them say idiotic things, do stupid irresponsible things or come out with huge fabrications of the truth or total lies.. I get angry. I get just as angry with the people that must have voted them into such positions.... and then I get angry with the apathetic people that didn't use their vote and just allowed it to happen.

    They say the pen is mightier than the sword...and your writing does not hold back its punches. I hope it is heard.
    satire is something to be relished but sadly goes over the heads of too many.

    All the best to you.

    J
    | Posted on 2020-08-03 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]


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