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The Hole.

Author: eggshells
ASL Info:    23/M/WA
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Words: 133
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Oh the wonderful, tricky, and sometimes down right evil thing sitting on our shoulders and its intrepid workings.

The Hole.

Here I am.

Going in.


Going against.
What I said.
To never do.

Take a breath.

Count to ten.

Do what you have to.

But now it's
Opening wider.

Daring me to
Peer inside her.

The attractions and horrors.
The memories.
The lores.

The better
Of me.

By my own

The madness.
The insanity.
The sadness and gladness.

A mixture of my own
mental toxins.

My all natural
Psychoactive concoctions.

I now swallow it down.

It grins as I enter.

No decision left to make.

Will fades.
Memory wades.
Reality becomes fake.

There I go.

Lost in my head.


Submitted on 2020-07-31 06:47:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Oh Goodness yes!
Whatever it is that sits on our shoulders has a lot to answer for!
it always gets away unscathed.


we have to face the consequences of
yielding to that delicious temptation
(or whatever)
sometimes it works out for the better
although from experience, looking back at
my own one minutes of madness
it rarely does!

what i have learned however
is not to beat myself up about it.
life has to go on!

Thank you for this.


| Posted on 2020-08-01 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]

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