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    dots Submission Name: The Hole.dots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 31/82/75
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 108
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    Bytes: 1049



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       Oh the wonderful, tricky, and sometimes down right evil thing sitting on our shoulders and its intrepid workings.


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    dotsThe Hole.dots
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    Here I am.

    Going in.

    Again.


    Going against.
    What I said.
    To never do.

    Take a breath.

    Count to ten.

    Do what you have to.

    But now it's
    Opening wider.

    Daring me to
    Peer inside her.

    The attractions and horrors.
    The memories.
    The lores.

    Temptation
    Getting
    The better
    Of me.

    Seduced
    Again
    By my own
    Reverie.

    The madness.
    The insanity.
    The sadness and gladness.

    A mixture of my own
    mental toxins.

    My all natural
    Psychoactive concoctions.

    I now swallow it down.

    It grins as I enter.

    No decision left to make.

    Will fades.
    Memory wades.
    Reality becomes fake.

    There I go.

    Lost in my head.

    Again.




    Submitted on 2020-07-31 06:47:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh Goodness yes!
    Whatever it is that sits on our shoulders has a lot to answer for!
    only
    it always gets away unscathed.

    While

    we have to face the consequences of
    yielding to that delicious temptation
    (or whatever)
    sometimes it works out for the better
    although from experience, looking back at
    my own one minutes of madness
    it rarely does!

    what i have learned however
    is not to beat myself up about it.
    life has to go on!

    Thank you for this.


    J

    | Posted on 2020-08-01 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]


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