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    Author: faideddarkness
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Idaho
    Elite Ratio:    6.46 - 101/56/52
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Here I exist,
    between death and dreams.
    Hollow heart,
    nothing left to scream.
    Fading memories,
    project one last time.
    Paying forward,
    someone else’s crimes.
    Behind these eyes,
    one last look about.
    I’m closing up,
    then signing out.




    Submitted on 2020-08-08 03:59:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think we have all felt this way, I know I feel like I have unwillingly paid forward someone else's crimes in the past. Poor souls.

    Passionate people get hurt often and feel empty when the passion isn't found but often we can find new things to be passionate about if we look, you may find what you need is still unknown.

    Favorite lines: "I'm closing up, then signing out."

    It makes me think of the countless times I have shut down at work frustrated and ready to wash my hands of it.
    | Posted on 2020-08-08 00:00:00 | by Specdro | [ Reply to This ]


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