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    dots Submission Name: "Chlorophyll Skeetz", 2017dots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 334/138/207
    Words: 492
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots"Chlorophyll Skeetz", 2017dots
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    REAU.




    Look at your soul in pearl juju
    gillett flying over faulting phalts.

    Zine infiltrated phosphoric sidney 
    off into an explosion of glo dynafrom
    the children of blues and maroon
    overshadowing the konradical purp
    embracing the ice vicinity of red hurl
    and whirled slush for stomachs
    filled passed indoctrinate dogmatic duker.
    Wondering how to not go through 
    spectrum whitening arriving 
    at blue monochromatic moonlight 
    trees barking, trees rustling their leaves
    and snarling their covered faces at me.

    Loud clouding,
    the tint of mermaid scales
    Pink jumping and skipping on steel
    while people feel if you let them slide,
    you will certainly let them ice skate
    and kick at you knowing they wear blades.
    Heart stain like fed up girlfriend bleach 
    all over expensive clothing
    that once covered lacerations from proceeding 
    to fight bulls after getting off my unicorn.
    People offering coffee 
    understanding the love of it- 
    for it- needy of mornings
    after someone were told to go drink Clorox.

    Bacterial properties bludgeoning the red 
    into a naught cherry juice squirt
    to make one side of a broken emotion
    Out to devour books and women
    with leather stares into the sliding
    the sliding- of boo thang turquoise
    militarized blue dotted along traumatic purple 
    static that of a smokers face for fire flow.
    Mystic curving as an apple with a candy center 
    white for twirling into nights 
    bumping up against the pants 
    the fidiculous starry starry universal
    flowering bomb out the womb of petals

    Greenish orange of hurricane dirt 
    on a window that only gets used 
    when rain cometh around-
    The birds chirped again, 
    the blades grass went up as should
    and new lusts came - a Santa Monica berry 
    of electric proportions 
    that shoots black fireworks in a sense 
    of breaking into an old vacant place of worship 
    just to access the roof to view a skyline.

    Hurrying hands dive for filling to feel
    these peachy puddles resembling
    shoreline throw back of a curly Taylor
    A neon layered torpedo traveling upward 
    through stingrays tit-dirt aqua region 
    in and out somethings favor.
    Blood dried by the sun 
    corrupted stream chemically showing up 
    shrine pink as other functional squares 
    out of your circle.

    Cruel splats of codone carnage 
    choking earlier droppings of blunthead venom
    I watch the world, leaning over tiger warmth.
    Little glints of truth showing up in life
    taking the shape of Emma Stone's face 
    confronting hardships for open eyes into black suns- 
    To get past gold muddy waters having chrome bottoms
    Using ladders to get from woods to beaches
    Slightly braking from groundbreak 
    the way John Tavares comes to stinging stops.
    To walk making the grounds cracks 
    want to escape with you.

    Look at your name in black cursive
    leaping across the malia of Venice.






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