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    dots Submission Name: "2020 CE", 2020dots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 334/138/207
    Words: 509
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
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    dots"2020 CE", 2020dots
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    READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED.







    The devalued year of
    Protect Your Essence
    Fear, manipulation, complacency,
    wisdom, right back to surprise;
    all of them make the guest list.
    If you couldn't remember dreams
    then you seemed asleep but restless
    as bullshit mismanaged it's own direction.

    Many held a gift of anger
    Crowd stops a speeding tanker
    Crowds move like a boss.
    Crowds get played with:
    The workers
    clean up merchandise
    they clock in to sell.
    Creating more tension
    and anger-
    Life is danger-discomfort
    while your cells war for you
    as if a ventilator were never present.

    The nightmare.
    Caused by
    an unhappy year.
    The hammer.
    Made by a worker
    The glue.
    Made by a worker
    The tree.
    Cut down by a worker
    The mask.
    You know the rest.

    Flames to floods
    For such a terrible movie
    Everyone is apart of the cast.
    Everyone divorced from routines
    Everybody relying on trade factors.
    The rent eats first
    with less
    medical assistance available.
    Beirut exploded
    Heroes died appearing healthy
    A more disappointing place to live in
    Imperialism continued
    The apologists began lockdown
    As people fought over
    leadership selection.
    More animals die - in Australia
    Hindus face Muslims
    Flames to floods.
    No one will ever change
    according to
    bloody human nature
    on a Doomsday timeline.
    Many cannot care
    about things that aren't profitable
    And odds are against many
    like a shiny slot machine.
    Luxurious laziness continued,
    toilet paper all about the profit
    Like a limitless power over society
    as the bodies dropped - from potential.

    Panic buying for dummies;
    ego outsmarts consumerism
    terrified of the future
    Nervous sweating
    Everybody can see the soot.
    As you look yourself
    in the eye--
    As lip service is paid
    As debts are socialized
    for firms to be bailed out.
    Freedom to do what?
    Change the situations?
    Change fireworks at random times?
    As time moves on
    The sun sets another day

    I can recall my best year
    To be alive
    This year speaks like a boss:
    "Write that down! Write that down!"
    As I'm trying to hold a beer,
    while half of it still felt surreal.

    It took shape
    into it's final form.
    And there was still..
    Four months to go.

    Cursed and wanting us
    to know it.
    I saw all of them worry
    with no shame to show it

    What the fuck is wrong
    with correcting oneself
    to not damage the planet?
    Civilians still got it
    emotional over humanity
    All that Loosh passing thru gravity

    Then another rose, to their own demise
    The desperation to escape survival mode
    all in these people's eyes.


    2020 CE






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