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    dots Submission Name: routinedots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.23 - 668/490/444
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    it doesn't matter what it means to me
    i can not change my reality
    the grander things are fantasies
    it's the simple life for me

    this is just a state of mind
    close enough to call it mine
    the channels change and rearrange me
    but i still have the things i need

    i doubt i need that second check
    i do not vote for what i collect
    the flames rage on from either side
    i'm ashamed to call either of them mine

    so all i need is this routine
    sitcoms groceries and poorly written poetry
    it doesn't change my value really
    it doesn't change what you see in me




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