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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.23 - 668/490/444
    Words: 288
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    i'm walking to the end
    counting my steps as i do
    trying to convince myself what is real
    and hanging on to a sliver of the truth
    the rhyme doesn't move me
    i think what i'm thinking
    it's just another form
    another form of the same thing

    imagine living a double life
    and then imagine only one side is real
    that's alot what it's like
    and even i don't know how to feel
    i thought by now i would have beaten you
    but all i brought were words laced with attitude
    and still you remain, firmly seated in my brain
    but i don't let you tell me what to do

    for fucks sake i don't like to talk about it
    i've gone days with out that dulled doom and dirty gloom
    i couldn't even explain how it works if i wanted to
    and the best i can do is deleriously assume

    i would like to pick a side and light a candle for a light
    but both sides are interdependent, and i need both of them to stay alive

    i wish i had something to say about the world
    but i spend hours repairing the seams of my own
    i can't afford to be a hashtag poet
    i have to be aware of where my thoughts go.

    i wish i could tranistion to a place where i could pick a side
    and make it true and make it mine
    but no matter how i rationalize
    only one side of this coin is truly mine.


    i'm sore from last weeks earnings
    looking and moving and learning
    getting use to the violence of the ocean
    accustomed to being swept by the current




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