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    dots Submission Name: differences of opiniondots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/465
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsdifferences of opiniondots

    you feel fine about these transgressions
    until you see them face to face
    using the crowd to confirm your beliefs
    until your audience moves at a different pace

    keeping it up just to move with the motions
    making like you're moving mountains
    while you're pouring water into the ocean

    it's hard to dilute a truth
    that stares right at you
    it's hard to stop a point
    when it's aimed to pierce through
    but all these daggers
    sharp as they might be
    are more so distractions
    from the attention you drink

    i don't wade in your bullshit
    much like i wouldn't expect you
    to wade in mine
    at least you come by it honest
    and you believe it to be truth
    with nothing else to find

    Submitted on 2020-09-03 15:29:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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