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    dots Submission Name: untitled songdots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/469
    Words: 376
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    dotsuntitled songdots

    slipping in to new forms of decay
    i can't imagine
    what you'd have to say

    the piece of me that cares has turned to ash
    i can't even tell you
    it was never meant to last

    i don't care how you think about me
    your thoughts collect and blow off with the breeze
    i will simply speak no see no harm
    and deal with all the silent mind alarms

    what you hold i know is a lie
    you're just looking for another lullaby
    something to imagine
    that could truly happen
    i won't be the star of your new dream
    i'm nothing like the person that you see

    like a doctor with no patience
    i'll sharpen my appliance
    just to make it stop each time you bleed

    you don't need to know me
    the world will one day show me
    do i deserve to be the one you need

    i don't care if you think about me
    these thoughts collect and blow off with the breeze
    i will simply speak no hear no harm
    and deal with all the silence in the violent mind alarms

    what i'm holding onto is a lie
    i've heard this same old boring lullaby
    something to imagine
    that could never truly happen
    you won't be the star of my day dreams
    i'm nothing like the person that you see

    in the end the diamonds turn back into dust
    while everyone is searching in a rush
    it's not complicated, bright lights over rated
    bright enough to make you give a fuck

    there's no better difference
    both sides are mismanaged
    the smart ones call it human evolution
    a superstitious sea of predestination
    what you have is all you'll ever get
    unless you find the way an atom splits
    for all the discontentment
    all that you can blame is perception
    for every time you thought that you were screwed
    has it ever dawned that it comes to what you do

    what we're holding onto is a lie
    and i'm the one who wrote this lullaby
    something to imagine
    as if it really happened
    i wish that i could close my eyes and scream
    and put an end to everything i dream

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