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    dots Submission Name: confessiondots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/465
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    as for the voices in my head
    i never meant to train them the way i do
    conversations with familiar strangers
    is all i need to get through

    if it's real i doubt my reality
    and if it's false i know where i stand
    fighting off a fantasy
    and not in a position to make demands

    in a couple of years the clock will run out
    and i'll have to reflect on what i've been thinking about
    at least the premise wouldn't crawl under your skin
    i can only account for my own delusions on the way down

    if i have to write it out i'll accept the function
    if it helps me reach a healthier conclusion
    i don't want to take it all
    but i don't want to invite a fall

    so you may see this as the delusion of a profession
    but in reality it's the form i chose to fight a sickness

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