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Author:	MyPeriodical
ASL Info:	18/m/pr
Elite Ratio:	4.12 - 314/248/356
Words:	52

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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The USA was formed by those of a mixed race yet it indoctrinated its people to believe in a name, a name that would be carried through generations, and transform the lives of many through its incessant implications of superiority and madness. If time were obsolete, then I would not simply be.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.