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    dots Submission Name: Passagedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 314/248/356
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPassagedots
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    The planets align in order to warn us of our prayers. Often times, the universe seems to be ending, but is it not the theory that convinces us that there truly is no end, and no beginning.
    The multiplication of the many souls is more often than not a physiological nuisance to existence as a whole, but what we may observe in the reflective need of our desires is that the subconscious is, in turn, endless, and those of which we may recall are so acutely aware of themselves that our individual personas adopt a synchronicity akin to reincarnation, though without much of the same pain that it takes to be reborn.




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