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    dots Submission Name: Passage part ||dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.12 - 314/248/356
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPassage part ||dots
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    Let us observe the testament that Jesus walked with the Devil.
    Is it not fathomable that this instead was an internalization made visual. So bewaring was this man that the alter ego (I
    opposition) tempted him for many days - Days that one could suppose based off of the biblical passages would have passed timelessly due to God’s omnipotence and the rest of the people’s perceptions of him.

    If time is a number, then it surely is and surely could be the endlessness that all that is Will and May become.




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