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    dots Submission Name: The Piperat the Gates of Dawndots
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    Author: Torie
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 205/226/85
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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    dotsThe Piperat the Gates of Dawndots
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    I am magic, quite like the quantum state, which only lasts undisturbed for a pico second, a billionth of a second.

    The quantum, the smallest anything can be, is completely fragile, yet it is the basis of our reality.

    And most important, our quantum is magical, it can be in two places at the same time, it can move through a solid wall, and can speak across vast distances immediately without delay. It is pure magic.

    It gives the lie to our quotidian world, the quantum and the quotidian are two poles of our existence.

    We have been selected by Nature to survive and reproduce in the quotidian world, so the only world we see is quotidian. But we know with as close to certainty as we can get, that we live in a quantum world.

    We can just hear the first notes of the Piper at the Gates of Dawn, and we are drawn irresistibly onwards, on to what we do not know nor care, click http://www.online-literature.com/grahame/windwillows/7/.




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