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    dots Submission Name: burnt outdots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.17 - 672/497/458
    Words: 290
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 51
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    i'm sick of all my selfish ways
    but we both know that i won't change
    i'm looking for an answer for my self
    i can't take it from any body else

    the party's almost over now
    and i'm all washed up before coming out
    the glory fades before i get a taste
    what a wonderful way i choose to waste



    there's no room for apologies
    i don't know what you saw in me
    but they say we sew exactly as we reep
    i might have meant the oppoisite
    as those who learned to give a shit
    but i still don't want to end up as the creep




    nothings in the works for me
    i've been high for several weeks
    and i don't really care that i'm alone
    i would rather shit the bed and get stoned

    i don't have a thing to say
    so i ramble on the silent way
    the internet is home to those like me
    trolls that wear the clothes of mental freaks



    there's no room for apologies
    i don't know what you saw in me
    but they say we sew exactly as we reep
    i might have meant the oppoisite
    as those who learned to give a shit
    but i still don't want to end up as the creep



    it might take a paragraph
    to show you i'm a selfish ass
    but i don't care enough to find the words
    i don't want to think about the worth

    i like it when i can't see straight
    my environment never complicates
    and i don't have to care if this makes sense
    it really feels like i'm close to the end




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