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    dots Submission Name: corporate performancedots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.17 - 672/497/458
    Words: 305
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
    Total Views: 42
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2047



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    dotscorporate performancedots
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    this empty room
    a hallway from my memories
    fading in and out of life
    day dreams of luxury.

    I'm essentially essential
    that's all that i can say
    invisible to everyone
    swept up in the fray

    strike a cord
    and the voices will sing along
    i swallow all your bullets
    if the pain will make me strong

    modern culture
    is all copy paste sentiment
    hollow vultures
    ravaging upon the acres of skin

    and that's exactly why we reside
    in the same old jaded lullaby
    unaware of everyone else
    fixated on our own side

    slide me into your inner eye
    needles push the drug inside
    everyone could use a vacation
    media meltdown logic pandemic

    who are you to judge my plan
    what kind of love makes cruel demands
    who am i to speak my mind
    I'm not on the popular side

    don't hashtag my anything
    i don't want to be heard
    I'll live my life by action
    and let my silence be the word

    i won't get discouraged
    i do not feel alone
    i am free to be myself
    to hell with what you've heard

    while we're on the topic
    i have never claimed to know
    a thought inside your head
    you didn't take out to show

    word salad is all you'll eat
    from my literal buffet
    there is not much sweet
    maybe much to your dismay

    lyrics incidental
    i don't need to be amused
    my greatest skill is accidental
    so i seem a bit confused

    fuck if i know how i do it
    i would call it one big guess
    and i wonder if it's useless
    as i work on what is next

    worker safety is our priority
    and sanity is an understudy
    this corporate performance
    is reserved for those on salary




    Submitted on 2020-10-01 20:05:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2020-10-09 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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