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the logic virus
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the logic virus
clever assholes in an intellect contest
confusing valid opinions with worn out puns
it turns out that we have become the bigger virus
and the hippies have been replaced by punks
you can blame it on the medium
or you can call it generational change
but individuals craft the collective message
emotive measures to quench our thirst for rage
have we lost our voices
or is it more likely our messages have changed
catching up with the designer hatred
we've crafted just to have the same things rearranged
how can two sides be so wrong
as to prefer a decline over compromise
small words from big mouths seem strong
but it's a weak tea to drink at sunrise
there's no room for suppositions
and there's nothing subtle that sells in hell
controversy is boredoms subscription
taking it down with a dose of don't ask don't tell
people play nice in the daylight
afraid to say what's on their mind
when they speak it's easier to divide
then to add up what's happened throughout there lives
i know there's no escape for us
our choice is to collapse or evolve
violent apes in a momentary hush
throwing our shit like the problems solved
Submitted on 2020-10-10 00:02:04
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You've tagged some of my favorite items here, particularly with comparing some people to the apes throwing shit and the need to keep evolving.
All is a good read, reflective of my own feelings in fact.
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