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    dots Submission Name: the logic virusdots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.17 - 672/497/458
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsthe logic virusdots
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    clever assholes in an intellect contest
    confusing valid opinions with worn out puns
    it turns out that we have become the bigger virus
    and the hippies have been replaced by punks

    you can blame it on the medium
    or you can call it generational change
    but individuals craft the collective message
    emotive measures to quench our thirst for rage

    have we lost our voices
    or is it more likely our messages have changed
    catching up with the designer hatred
    we've crafted just to have the same things rearranged

    how can two sides be so wrong
    as to prefer a decline over compromise
    small words from big mouths seem strong
    but it's a weak tea to drink at sunrise

    there's no room for suppositions
    and there's nothing subtle that sells in hell
    controversy is boredoms subscription
    taking it down with a dose of don't ask don't tell

    people play nice in the daylight
    afraid to say what's on their mind
    when they speak it's easier to divide
    then to add up what's happened throughout there lives

    i know there's no escape for us
    our choice is to collapse or evolve
    violent apes in a momentary hush
    throwing our shit like the problems solved






    Submitted on 2020-10-10 00:02:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You've tagged some of my favorite items here, particularly with comparing some people to the apes throwing shit and the need to keep evolving.

    All is a good read, reflective of my own feelings in fact.

    Lloyd

    | Posted on 2020-10-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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