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    dots Submission Name: billiedots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.17 - 672/497/458
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    do you ever think about me
    in the middle of a song
    the way i think about you
    when these thoughts
    just won't leave me alone

    tomorrow asks for answers
    to the things that i see
    and I wonder if you'd notice
    like I too, am something to believe

    I can't answer for the content
    I don't mean to believe these things
    but I can pretend it all to nothing
    sure as the sun and the trees

    I'd be just about the same
    if we did or didn't do it
    but either way bragging to anyone
    seems counter productive and useless

    I guess it's all the game
    trapped in photos of the same
    my face need not to rearrange
    half the truth is usually estranged
    my heart is sure to beat the same

    fantasy oh fantasy
    what do you mean to me
    how would this be different
    if it were reality

    I know that I'm not smart enough
    to collect the riches i imagine
    either way I'm ready to claim
    inspiration from the damage

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