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    dots Submission Name: Fear Of Commitment Or Falling Foreverdots
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    Author: cornonthekob
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    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsFear Of Commitment Or Falling Foreverdots
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    i don't want to die alone
    but that's how i want to live
    life can burn so slow
    and i only have so much to give

    when you can be anything you'd like
    why would you choose to be with me
    all i want is a wisper of that life
    instead of wondering what would be

    but to live is to die alone
    an inevitability for those that live
    because life can burn so slow
    and we have only so much to give

    you never had me by your side
    i was only dreaming at your eyes
    too much would truly change my life
    and i'm already buried in the lies




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