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Submission Name:
Fear Of Commitment Or Falling Forever
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Author:
cornonthekob
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Fear Of Commitment Or Falling Forever
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i don't want to die alone
but that's how i want to live
life can burn so slow
and i only have so much to give
when you can be anything you'd like
why would you choose to be with me
all i want is a wisper of that life
instead of wondering what would be
but to live is to die alone
an inevitability for those that live
because life can burn so slow
and we have only so much to give
you never had me by your side
i was only dreaming at your eyes
too much would truly change my life
and i'm already buried in the lies
Submitted on 2020-10-14 19:36:17
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