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    dots Submission Name: a fools paradisedots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 675/504/469
    Words: 366
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    dotsa fools paradisedots

    i don't care about the fame
    the public notoriety
    i could care less about a prize
    i have plenty of money

    it sure would be nice
    to add up to something
    to look to my life
    and know it added up to anything

    but realistically i'm a lot of things
    none of which is a prodigy
    it's a struggle to comprehend
    while i'm watching the tv

    i guess it doesn't mean my life comes to an end
    i can still have goals and interests, even aspirations
    as long as i remember it's only pretend
    i'll probably spend half of my life in my imagination

    i walk thin lines
    halving my cake and eating in twos
    i tamper with the evidence
    to exercise both sides and give myself clues

    testing myself and thinking foreign conversations
    gutter punctuation for notation of the evidence
    as of right now i can feel like it is evident
    half of what i am is concealed like a murder weapon

    i feel guilty for poetry
    and the radio is talking to me
    i know what to ignore
    if we are to put it more delicately

    it's less about conventional measures of worth
    and it's more like crafting a stronger attitude
    as long as i have enough sense to dismiss the unlikely
    i'll feel my way around and walk confidently out of this room

    it is here that the possibility strikes me
    that my thoughts could be heard by the people i see
    i know that it's nonsense therefore i dismiss it
    there's no way they could hear, even in the delusion

    this whole thing is just a distraction from different problems
    but it's almost fun to believe so i don't bother to solve it
    insanity smiles upon me
    i've found loop holes through negotiating

    but there will never be the day
    when this headache goes away
    cuz these symptoms won't subside
    i can only manage them with time

    and for now the clock carries on
    ticking away time and the battery is strong
    so i'll roll right along
    with my heart in an algortithm
    and my soul in a song

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