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    dots Submission Name: psychotic conversationsdots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.17 - 672/497/458
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotspsychotic conversationsdots
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    no matter what i do 
    only half of me is true
    i feel like i've been used
    like i could ever
    live up
    to you
    do you ever think about
    thinking about me
    the way i think about everything
    not thinking of you
    do you ever think about
    telling your heart completely
    the way i think about nothing
    thinking about you

    even if i'm wrong, i want to live within the songs
    let them transform me, i'm ready to be anything
    even if it's real, i do not know the way you feel
    do you let it transform you, do you know what you're heading to

    for better
    for verse
    for both sides
    perverse
    like the strings on your purse
    does my poking make you hurt

    i kind of like the way you wrap me in your art
    i kind of like it when you watch me fall apart
    i like it rightly when the lines all line up 2
    the corner of my mind where all the fantasies are true




    Submitted on 2020-10-16 19:00:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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