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    dots Submission Name: computational explosiondots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.17 - 672/497/458
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Legend
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    dotscomputational explosiondots
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    a part of me remembers living a double life
    and it will be a matter of years
    before you're introduced to the other side

    in the silence of a dream i conceived a contraption
    not i sit within the wake only afraid of their reactions
    what if i was wrong in my naïve perception
    maybe i was lost because i couldn't take direction

    if i wasn't so stubborn then i wouldn't be this way now
    but the way that got me in is the way that gets me out
    as much as i would love to take the credit for it now
    i am just afraid that's not the way that it works out

    so if you heard me well i'd rather keep it to ourselves
    i would like the opportunity to truly be my self
    i don't care to tell you much but i can get confused
    sitting in a room of powder looking for a fuse




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