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    dots Submission Name: a realizationdots

    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 673/504/464
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsa realizationdots

    i have no reason to be like you
    I've got a different point of view
    all i need is proof of purchase
    anecdotal evidence is useless

    i don't know your gods
    looming over your morality
    i do not pick sides among them
    but i take what i need

    a spiritual thief
    i'll accept the spiral tomorrow
    i need this fantasy
    to keep my mind off of the sorrow
    all that i know is
    cause and effect
    so hard to see the evidence
    when it lives within the dissonance

    it's not your distance that disturbs me
    it's the altered rendition of reality
    i have nothing to offer you
    i'm just waiting for the truth

    i make plans by the day light
    i've never been one for a night life
    calcuations of a larger caliber
    and the voices at a wisper.

    i know that we negotiate
    i understand the terms
    so i'm standing at the end
    assuming something i've earned.

    maybe it's my ego maybe i'm just ill
    these patterns all around me and my fate is sealed
    so much for hiding in the crowd
    what chewed me up will spit me out

    Submitted on 2020-10-24 17:53:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful work here. I suspect we have a lot in common. I do, however, suspect that you actually do know my gods.

    | Posted on 2020-10-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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