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    dots Submission Name: an act of betrayaldots
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    Author: cornonthekob
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 673/504/464
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsan act of betrayaldots
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    i have nothing to say
    i'd rather move along
    i assumed good things about you
    it turned out i assumed wrong

    you've got your misadventures
    but i never agreed to fund them
    and at the end of the day
    i only hope it was worth it

    anything nice i could think about you
    is hiding behind a fog of mistrust
    i wonder if you'll come with an excuse
    or just pretend to not know that much




    Submitted on 2020-11-06 13:05:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I suspect you will find that most people do not think most things in much depth. There is much wisdom having been preserved through the ages... that is because such is special. ;)
    | Posted on 2020-11-09 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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