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There's Always that One Guy

Author: gwenn sundala
Elite Ratio:    3.68 - 76 /71 /53
Words: 336
Class/Type: Rant /Venting
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you always have that one person at work that just makes you wanna choke someone. today I was inspired by my own One Guy and had to get it off my chest.

There's Always that One Guy

You make me feel guilty for being nice
Your customer service is like rolling the dice
You make fun when I’m eager to learn and to grow
But I’ll be the one laughing when you’re not in the know
When the boss gives us orders for what we should do
I would listen to her before I listen to you
You bitch and complain about this every day
You say that you’ll quit, so just please go away
You don’t do what you’re told is what needs to be done
you frown upon everything cuz work isn’t fun
well guess what, my friend, the problem ain’t us
I do what I’m told, I don’t put up a fuss
If you really hate your job that much then just quit
Don’t whine and moan and throw your little baby fit
I’m proud of my job and I love what I do
So Bitch, let me tell you; I’m so over you
I keep my head high and I wear a bright smile
I’ll even whistle while I work for a little while
Have you gotten the hint? Not yet? Not surprised
You’re too worried about yourself to open your eyes
To a world full of people who live in the dark
We can bring them the light if we ignite the spark
A smile can warm even the grouchiest face
The love of another makes the world a better place
So if you wish to stay under a dark cloud
I ask that around me you don’t hang around
If you do stay with me, you better beware
I’m not hiding my happiness; I’m going to share
It gladly with the world, for we all need the light
I will not give up, I will put up a fight
I will sing a song at the top of my lungs
Hold on tight, for I’ve only just begun
You have no power over me, you don’t
You want me to be like you, well I won’t

Submitted on 2020-12-03 00:16:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  extremely clear writing here. paints the picture of some self-entitled coworker who gets on everyone's nerves which is something we've all experienced. i also like that you've consistently kept your rhyme scheme the whole way through. it adds to the aesthetics of the piece and makes it flow better. even with the somewhat longer lines the rhythm of the piece was easy to find. hopefully you've gotten off your chest what you intended. i enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
| Posted on 2020-12-03 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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