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    dots Submission Name: There's Always that One Guydots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 76/71/52
    Words: 336
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 118
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1859



    Description:
       you always have that one person at work that just makes you wanna choke someone. today I was inspired by my own One Guy and had to get it off my chest.


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    You make me feel guilty for being nice
    Your customer service is like rolling the dice
    You make fun when I’m eager to learn and to grow
    But I’ll be the one laughing when you’re not in the know
    When the boss gives us orders for what we should do
    I would listen to her before I listen to you
    You bitch and complain about this every day
    You say that you’ll quit, so just please go away
    You don’t do what you’re told is what needs to be done
    you frown upon everything cuz work isn’t fun
    well guess what, my friend, the problem ain’t us
    I do what I’m told, I don’t put up a fuss
    If you really hate your job that much then just quit
    Don’t whine and moan and throw your little baby fit
    I’m proud of my job and I love what I do
    So Bitch, let me tell you; I’m so over you
    I keep my head high and I wear a bright smile
    I’ll even whistle while I work for a little while
    Have you gotten the hint? Not yet? Not surprised
    You’re too worried about yourself to open your eyes
    To a world full of people who live in the dark
    We can bring them the light if we ignite the spark
    A smile can warm even the grouchiest face
    The love of another makes the world a better place
    So if you wish to stay under a dark cloud
    I ask that around me you don’t hang around
    If you do stay with me, you better beware
    I’m not hiding my happiness; I’m going to share
    It gladly with the world, for we all need the light
    I will not give up, I will put up a fight
    I will sing a song at the top of my lungs
    Hold on tight, for I’ve only just begun
    You have no power over me, you don’t
    You want me to be like you, well I won’t




    Submitted on 2020-12-03 00:16:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      extremely clear writing here. paints the picture of some self-entitled coworker who gets on everyone's nerves which is something we've all experienced. i also like that you've consistently kept your rhyme scheme the whole way through. it adds to the aesthetics of the piece and makes it flow better. even with the somewhat longer lines the rhythm of the piece was easy to find. hopefully you've gotten off your chest what you intended. i enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2020-12-03 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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