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    dots Submission Name: "Marlene Dietrich en color", 2020dots

    Author: Rex Gold
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 334/142/221
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots"Marlene Dietrich en color", 2020dots

    Eyes quinlan

    Roak green of the war

    Hand comforting chin

    Snazzy as eden legs

    Debbie pearls sleeved

    In Lady Hollywood jaood

    Next to an elise finger

    As roho daggers rub beige suede

    Pink dripped into frostwire

    Flush lips sit tightly striking

    So that silver illuminates

    What Von Sternberg exalted

    So that the look brings you in

    Captivation was typical without persuasion

    Submitted on 2020-12-17 01:55:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like things like this which require me to learn something new in an attempt to better understand what's going on. When we do a "search" on a given word or phrase, we never really know where that will lead or whether it's even applicable to the poem, and yet we have learned that much more even if on a tangent.

    Good exercise in the morning to spur the neurons along with a hot cup of coffee, thanks!

    | Posted on 2020-12-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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