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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1573/460/128
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Yet another earlier work that was somehow missing from this collection.


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    Believe: in what you see,
    and touch, and smell, and taste, and hear,
    or, is that what you're been taught to believe?
    How long does it last? Will we ever agree?

    Shift: change focus, glance, turn or blink,
    pay attention, for a change, to those senses you trust,
    tricksters dance at the edge, beyond what you know,
    quicker by far, than mere time, can you think?

    Look closer at anything, can't you see more?
    Even blankness or randomness, your mind will supply,
    deeper images, meaning, from whence do you know?
    Patience, practice, time builds up your store.




    Submitted on 2021-01-05 13:41:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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