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    dots Submission Name: The Chain Gangdots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1573/461/128
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Chain Gangdots
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    Look at pressure of peers like a bowl full of poop
    one might buy without thought to be part of a group
    all ideas in concrete wearing fashion in clone
    lockstep towards tomorrow and forsake blood and bone

    make to the party scene a most compelling throng
    there be music and wine just for laugh dance and song
    unkind spirits lay waste to what judgement there be
    now so dulled not inclined to find philosophy

    take a break in pursuit of your place in such game
    find some meaning of self ponder from where you came
    for to know a real high let your mind sober be
    and join those who seek truth if you choose to be free




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