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Author:	Blue Monk
Elite Ratio:	8 - 1573/461/128
Words:	52

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	125
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	332

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Hmm, I don't remember the original title. Regardless, I'm in the mode to put some decor onto this cake.

Changes

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The odds get better by the day,
your Fates will turn for glee or spite.
New things to happen, come your way,
Optimis gold which shines so bright!
But should your happiness decay,
Pessimis webs may bring a blight.
Not knowing, you may fears allay,
God keeps his children in his sight.

Submitted on 2021-01-05 14:34:09 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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